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[SI] Monochrome Commentary
Time for more amazingly uninsightful commentary on the latest shoot-in;
Monochrome. Our heroes, for this round, were challenged to shoot color pictures that were very monochrome in tone, and challenged to include an object that proved it was a color picture. The usual caveats apply to any comments I make on someone else's work; I have no idea what I'm talking about, so take it all with huge grains of salt, pepper, or curry. Better turnout this time, and some good examples of the mandate. Here we go: Solomon Peachy: http://www.pbase.com/shootin/image/73110164 It's a pretty flat looking shot, but I think there's actually too many different colors present to call this monochrome. It's close, but not quite monochrome for me, since I live my life on the edge. Not. The inclusion of a small yellow flower is a nice touch, and does break up the monotony of the shot, and all submittors were promised bonus "points" for including such an item. So Solomon has that going for him. C+ Douglas: http://www.pbase.com/shootin/image/73110177 Hell, Douglas, this IS a monochrome shot! Don't get me wrong, I like the shot, but would have preffered it if it were actually color, or desaturated with just one of the flowers in color. It's monochrome, but is not a perfect fit for the mandate, since I believe that the idea was to shoot something in color that could be mistaken for a monochrome shot. But it's a very nice shot of the bride. C+ Doug Payne: http://www.pbase.com/shootin/image/73110331 Now this is a color/monochrome shot! No, there's no tell-tale element of color, other than the very subtle knot, but you can tell that this is a color pic that simply looks like a one-color shot due to the subtle shadings of color on the wood (very subtle). The carving/petroglyph is nicely anchoring the shot and leads the eye towards the lower right corner of the image, the lighting is angled to show the texture of the wood, and exposure is in the money. Nice job. B+ Bowser (mine): http://www.pbase.com/shootin/image/73110553 Yes, I know. What a waste of a 5D. But the shot is very monochrome, and if you didn't have the small colored shingles on the right side of the image, it would look pretty B&W. The composition is typical Bowser, for better or worse. It does meet the mandate, though, and includes the colored item. B Michelo: http://www.pbase.com/shootin/image/73110598 Good God, did you desaturate that leaf, or is it that bland and flat? Nice job! If not for the yellowish (insert proper name for organic matter) stuff, it would indeed look very monochrome. I think I would have preffered a little more side lighting, but it's likely that the very flat lighting contributed to the very flat look of the stone and leaf. B+ Jim Kramer: http://www.pbase.com/shootin/image/73110722 Ah, a monochrome image that is not gray, but shades of brown. Fits the mandate well, even though the brown tones obviously indicate a color image. It also includes a nice red dog tongue which proves that the shot is multi-colored, and gains very valuable bonus points. However, there are some shades of green and black, so it's not totally monochrome. But I like dogs. B- Walter Banks: http://www.pbase.com/shootin/image/73153601 What a perfect shot for this mandate! I love it! The scene is obviously a full-color shot, but seems to be a very flat black and white shot. Yes, I see the slight intrusion of shades of brown on the rocks and trees, but at first glance you eyes are not drawn to it, and until you see the prominent yellow sign, you could easily mistake this for a monochrome shot. Nice job! A Duncan Chesley: http://www.pbase.com/shootin/image/73159817 I was wondering if anyone would take this route, and submit a night shot, like a starry sky with a plane in flight. No question, this shot looks totally monochrome. I wish I knew what I was looking at, however. I see the sky, treeline, and something in the foreground that I can't make out. My issue, I guess. Fits the mandate very well, but not as spectacular as some of the other shots. B- Mardon: http://www.pbase.com/shootin/image/73159831 My other favorite shot in this group. A black vehicle in the snow. No color, nothing except for signal and tali lights on the vehicle. Excellent! I know this isn't an artistic composition, but for this mandate, it's perfect. Desaturate the running lights and you've got a monochrome image, for sure. Plus, I like Xterras. I just wish they got better gas mileage. But that's not important here. Mardon, where is Outer Cove? I was in NF a few years ago hiking, and I'm just curious. A Fire away... |
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[SI] Monochrome Commentary
"Kinon O'Cann" wrote:
Mardon: http://www.pbase.com/shootin/image/73159831 My other favorite shot in this group. A black vehicle in the snow. No color, nothing except for signal and tali lights on the vehicle. Excellent! I know this isn't an artistic composition, but for this mandate, it's perfect. Desaturate the running lights and you've got a monochrome image, for sure. Plus, I like Xterras. I just wish they got better gas mileage. But that's not important here. Mardon, where is Outer Cove? I was in NF a few years ago hiking, and I'm just curious. A Whoa! I wish I'd had you for a Prof in university many, many years ago. Thanks! Put these coordinates into Google Earth and you'll see exactly where our Xterra was parked. 47.653409N 52.685172W The camera was looking southeast. I like the Xterra too. It's supercharged, which is also good; everywhere except at the gas pumps. We average 15 liters per 100 Km. |
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Monochrome Commentary
Kinon O'Cann wrote:
Jim Kramer: http://www.pbase.com/shootin/image/73110722 Ah, a monochrome image that is not gray, but shades of brown. Fits the mandate well, even though the brown tones obviously indicate a color image. It also includes a nice red dog tongue which proves that the shot is multi-colored, and gains very valuable bonus points. However, there are some shades of green and black, so it's not totally monochrome. But I like dogs. B- Four days ago I was thinking that this would be one of the last pictures I would ever have of this dog. Fortunately $5,500 can fix almost anything, except a whole in your wallet. This was set up as a B&W Jpeg shot that had the RAW on too. I like it better as a B&W but this is in color and that kinda fits the mandate. Thanks for commenting, Jim |
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[SI] Monochrome Commentary
: Douglas: http://www.pbase.com/shootin/image/73110177
: Hell, Douglas, this IS a monochrome shot! Don't get me wrong, I like the : shot, but would have preferred it if it were actually color, or desiderated : with just one of the flowers in color. It's monochrome, but is not a perfect : fit for the mandate, since I believe that the idea was to shoot something in : color that could be mistaken for a monochrome shot. But it's a very nice : shot of the bride. C+ --------------------------- The really difficult part about submitting an image to a (insert description) when the mandate is "Monochrome" without a description of the mandate accompanying it until a day after you make your submission... Is (insert whatever comes to mind). In hindsight (Why are there no ears on our hips) I would have submitted this shot: http://www.photosbydouglas.com/colorchrome.jpg But then if I'd known I would fall off my perch, I'd never have built a hide in a tree either! For those uninformed... I fell out of a tree whilst shooting the birth of thousands of baby pelicans when one irate bird noticed me and attacked! -- Australian Wedding Photography between Kempsy, NSW and Sunshine Coast. http://www.photosbydouglas.com Digital photos enlarged and printed on Canvas http://canvas.photosbydouglas.com |
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[SI] Monochrome Commentary
Kinon O'Cann wrote:
It's a pretty flat looking shot, but I think there's actually too many different colors present to call this monochrome. It's close, but not quite monochrome for me, since I live my life on the edge. Not. The inclusion of a small yellow flower is a nice touch, and does break up the monotony of the shot, and all submittors were promised bonus "points" for including such an item. So Solomon has that going for him. C+ The flower was the point of the image, but I didn't achieve what I was trying to do. I coincidentally discovered the mandate a couple of days later, so in the end I kept an otherwise lousy image and submitted it instead of just relegating it to /dev/null. If I were to submit something I already had taken, this would have been a much better choice: http://www.shaftnet.org/po/photo.php?photo=22401 - Solomon |
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[SI] Monochrome Commentary
Kinon O'Cann wrote: Time for more amazingly uninsightful commentary on the latest shoot-in; Monochrome. Our heroes, for this round, were challenged to shoot color pictures that were very monochrome in tone, and challenged to include an object that proved it was a color picture. The usual caveats apply to any comments I make on someone else's work; I have no idea what I'm talking about, so take it all with huge grains of salt, pepper, or curry. Walter Banks: http://www.pbase.com/shootin/image/73153601 What a perfect shot for this mandate! I love it! The scene is obviously a full-color shot, but seems to be a very flat black and white shot. Yes, I see the slight intrusion of shades of brown on the rocks and trees, but at first glance you eyes are not drawn to it, and until you see the prominent yellow sign, you could easily mistake this for a monochrome shot. Nice job! A Thanks for the kind comments. I wished that I could say that I planned long and hard for this shot as a candidate for this mandate. On a gray day with a light dusting of snow I was exploring around with my nephew and spouse and we stopped at the flume. It had rained for much of the previous two weeks so the water was running at spring volume. This is at the bottom of an escapment where water cascades down for about 120 feet from a lake. (Transportation for logs) I was playing with shutter speed to see the effects on the rushing water unaware of the no hiking sign until I got home. Processing was limited to resizing and lightening. (No color changes) This not the first time I have used the flume for SI. The follow image is part of the same waterway that was dug out and straightened to allow logs to driven over the escarpment. http://www.pbase.com/shootin/image/47810873 w.. |
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[SI] Monochrome Commentary
On 17/01/2007 7:36 PM, Kinon O'Cann wrote:
Doug Payne: http://www.pbase.com/shootin/image/73110331 Now this is a color/monochrome shot! No, there's no tell-tale element of color, other than the very subtle knot, but you can tell that this is a color pic that simply looks like a one-color shot due to the subtle shadings of color on the wood (very subtle). The carving/petroglyph is nicely anchoring the shot and leads the eye towards the lower right corner of the image, the lighting is angled to show the texture of the wood, and exposure is in the money. Nice job. B+ Thanks, Bowser. It was shot inside an old trapper's log hut about 8x8' with a sod roof and no windows. The slight blue tinge is a reflection of the blue sky coming through the open door. Other than resize for Web, all I did was a touch of curves and a bit of smart sharpening. |
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[SI] Monochrome Commentary
"Kinon O'Cann" wrote in message news:7izrh.4353$dV1.4243@trndny02... Michelo: http://www.pbase.com/shootin/image/73110598 Good God, did you desaturate that leaf, or is it that bland and flat? Nice job! If not for the yellowish (insert proper name for organic matter) stuff, it would indeed look very monochrome. I think I would have preffered a little more side lighting, but it's likely that the very flat lighting contributed to the very flat look of the stone and leaf. B+ All the leaves have been on the ground for four months. Actually, I did autocolor in photoshop and it boosted the colors and contrast. For the lighting angle, the subject was on a big rock and I could not wait for the sun to move because the clouds were coming in to drop 20 cm of snows. Michel |
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[SI] Monochrome Commentary
Douglas wrote: In hindsight (Why are there no ears on our hips) I would have submitted this shot: http://www.photosbydouglas.com/colorchrome.jpg But then if I'd known I would fall off my perch, I'd never have built a hide in a tree either! Nice, they have their pecking order sorted. w.. |
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[SI] Monochrome Commentary
"Mardon" wrote in message . 130... "Kinon O'Cann" wrote: Mardon: http://www.pbase.com/shootin/image/73159831 My other favorite shot in this group. A black vehicle in the snow. No color, nothing except for signal and tali lights on the vehicle. Excellent! I know this isn't an artistic composition, but for this mandate, it's perfect. Desaturate the running lights and you've got a monochrome image, for sure. Plus, I like Xterras. I just wish they got better gas mileage. But that's not important here. Mardon, where is Outer Cove? I was in NF a few years ago hiking, and I'm just curious. A Whoa! I wish I'd had you for a Prof in university many, many years ago. Thanks! Hell, it does fit the mandate perfectly... Put these coordinates into Google Earth and you'll see exactly where our Xterra was parked. 47.653409N 52.685172W The camera was looking southeast. I like the Xterra too. It's supercharged, which is also good; everywhere except at the gas pumps. We average 15 liters per 100 Km. |
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