(June, 18th) New Picture

Hello,

In this beginning of the week, here it is a new
picture

http://www.monochromatique.com/photosemaine/

Regards,

--
Daniel Rocha | Photographie
http://www.monochromatique.com

On Jun 18, 12:14 am, "Daniel Rocha" wrote:
Hello,

In this beginning of the week, here it is a new
picture

http://www.monochromatique.com/photosemaine/

Regards,

--
Daniel Rocha | Photographie
http://www.monochromatique.com

Very nice street scene. Being in the right place and seeing the image
is how good images are created. Yet the highlights just jump up and
take the eye away from the ladys face. I was more curious about the
window in the background. Is that a face or just the way the curtain
hung? If a face, was it spying on the lady?
If you had moved a little camera left to capture the man sitting
behind the lady, looking the opposite direction. Or if you had moved a
bit to camera right to hide the man. It would have reduced the trouble
I am having with the background competing with the subject.

The feeling you were after does come through. A young lady waiting
for someone and nervous that the person might not show. Watch your
dust spots too.

Keep shooting Daniel. You are improving.


Draco

Getting even isn't good enough.

Doing better does.

On Jun 18, 12:14 am, "Daniel Rocha" wrote:
Hello,

In this beginning of the week, here it is a new
picture

http://www.monochromatique.com/photosemaine/

Compositional Hell.

Draco wrote:
Very nice street scene. Being in the right place and seeing the image
is how good images are created. Yet the highlights just jump up and
take the eye away from the ladys face.

Thanks Draco.

I was more curious about the
window in the background. Is that a face or just the way the curtain
hung? If a face, was it spying on the lady?

I don't understand what you mean !

If you had moved a little camera left to capture the man sitting
behind the lady, looking the opposite direction. Or if you had moved a
bit to camera right to hide the man. It would have reduced the trouble
I am having with the background competing with the subject.

At the opposite ther is a couple of person, and many more
elements.

The feeling you were after does come through. A young lady waiting
for someone and nervous that the person might not show. Watch your
dust spots too.
Keep shooting Daniel. You are improving.

Thanks Draco !

--
Daniel Rocha | Photographie
http://www.monochromatique.com

On Jun 24, 5:13 pm, "Daniel Rocha" wrote:
Draco wrote:
Very nice street scene. Being in the right place and seeing the image
is how good images are created. Yet the highlights just jump up and
take the eye away from the ladys face.

Thanks Draco.

I was more curious about the
window in the background. Is that a face or just the way the curtain
hung? If a face, was it spying on the lady?

I don't understand what you mean !

To the right of the subject there is a window near the open door way.
There is a curtain, object or face there in the right center of the
window. Since I'm not there and can not enlarge the image to look I
have to guess. Makes it a bit more interesting.


If you had moved a little camera left to capture the man sitting
behind the lady, looking the opposite direction. Or if you had moved a
bit to camera right to hide the man. It would have reduced the trouble
I am having with the background competing with the subject.

At the opposite ther is a couple of person, and many more
elements.


Ah, I knew there was a reason for the angle. But that might have made
tha image even more provocative. Maybe next time, eh?



The feeling you were after does come through. A young lady waiting
for someone and nervous that the person might not show. Watch your
dust spots too.
Keep shooting Daniel. You are improving.

Thanks Draco !

You are quite welcome Daniel. Keep shooting and showing us your work.
It has improved greatly since I first saw your post two years ago.

Draco


Getting even isn't good enough.

Doing better does.

Draco wrote:
To the right of the subject there is a window near the open door way.
There is a curtain, object or face there in the right center of the
window. Since I'm not there and can not enlarge the image to look I
have to guess. Makes it a bit more interesting.

It's an object, not clearly, due to blur

Ah, I knew there was a reason for the angle. But that might have made
tha image even more provocative. Maybe next time, eh?

Who knows ?!

You are quite welcome Daniel. Keep shooting and showing us your work.
It has improved greatly since I first saw your post two years ago.

Thanks Draco.

But I can't see an improvment. Because picture are taken in particular
situations. The picture of the 18th june is taken 1 year and a half ago.
And this week, the picture were takenlast month !

So much situations...



--
Daniel Rocha | Photographie
http://www.monochromatique.com