Savageduck wrote:

SI Mandate: http://www.pbase.com/shootin/letters_fgs


Sid:
FGS-01:
Nice pooch!

that's Delilah, our Spaniel

FGS-02:
This seascape is a great scene, but I find the blown patch of cloud in
the upper left not quite right, and I am not sure what could be done to
fix that. I like the way the light hits the foam around the rocks
contrasting with the grass and wild flowers going to the shoreline.
Perhaps a crop might help my sensitively here?
http://db.tt/aoI2g36h

You're right about the blown sky, I confess to having rushed all three, dare
I say it, the day after they were due.
this any better?

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/92601884/%5B...FGS_sid_2a.jpg

That's Gull Rock by the way


FGS-03:
Nice berries, somewhat marred by focus issues. I am at a loss as to how
these fit the “FGS” mandate?

Fruit, with focus or without focus if you prefer.

cheers for commenting

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sid
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