Peter Fauland wrote:

Hi,

http://www.fauland-fotografie.de/Bildkritik.html

this shot was taken in the staricase of an old house using ambient
light. I was trying with and without additional flash, but like this
version better. Comments are welcome.
bye
Peter


Excellent composition and subject placement.

The flat lighting doesn't work, however. Something needs to done to
give depth to her face.

-1.5 to -2 Fill light from the left to cast a weak shaddow from her hair
and nose, as well as put stronger catchlights in her eyes, perhaps.

Cheers,
Alan

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