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Old July 14th 06, 07:27 PM posted to rec.photo.equipment.35mm
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Default (3rd July) Picture of the Week


Daniel Rocha wrote:
Hello,

I would like to show you the latest picture of the
week

http://www.monochromatique.com/photosemaine/

Regards,

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Daniel Rocha | Photographie
http://www.monochromatique.com


Nice tonal quality in the black & white.
The sky needs a flock of birds to fill in.
The model seems to float away from
the background. Instead of capturing
others at work shooting models, why
don't you find some who need shots
for their portfollios? Expand your work
Daniel and grow with it.

The color shot of the jacket just
left me questioning what was going on.
You images need to tell anyone
looking at them a story. If you
are going to do more journalistic
shooting, you need to hit the
viewer with power of the image.
Be able to look at the image and
have a story for it in their mind.
It might not be the story you have
in mind when you took the image.
But one non the less.

Keep at it. I am impressed at how
well you are doing.


Draco


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